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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Keep Writing!

I enjoyed reading your story. Will there be a chapter two? I hope so.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
a bloody great read!

a thoroughly enjoyable read. great idea for us older guys to provide a service, well composed and plenty of details to keep us interested. i'm off to the t-shirt printers. thanks again.

marklionmarklionover 15 years ago
Lucky Guy!!!

That Guy was really lucky with the women. I like the way you wrote the story and describe the sex scenes with him and his women. I hope you read another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
enjoyed this

loved this, but you cant keep us in suspense, what happens next?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
great story for older guys

wish this could happen to me...tough being an older guy who love young pussy

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

wow what a wonderful and delightful story.. If only all that was true.. Imagine the woman that would be experienced with love and affection if they were taught to love there bodies as you make love to them

Love the story, cheers

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Like to talk to both men and women about erotic writing. I am always looking for people to help me edit my work and welcome input about spelling, punctuation, syntax and the general readability of my stories. Right now, (June 2013) I am doing research for the stories I write ...