All Comments on 'Show Me How'

If you can't be bothered to continue your own story, don't bother writing at all.

bring on the next chapter,

Please complete the following chapters you are doing a great job.

Ignore the other commenter who is just being a dick. Your writing is good. Keep it up.

Please continue, I can hardly wait for edition 2.

Please, another chapter

Chapter 2 and more to follow..... you have a gift!!!

Good story, but it's ruined by apostrophes instead of quotation marks for dialog.

But hey, don't listen to me or other critics. The mindless and illiterate zombies think that there should be no criticism at all, only praise.

BUT the story was moving so well....I didn't notice the single mark instead of quotation marks.

I think you have touched

third base, and are headed for home. Most of the gathered crowd is cheering!!!

Thanks Don

HOT HOT HOT.....!!!! I got lost in the story and cannot wait for more!!! The sensuality of this story far outweighs any concerns about punctuation...it did NOT diminish it for me at all...keep it up and hopefully Ch. 02 (and more) is coming soon!!!!

Would love to see a next chapter

This is SO hot and sexy!!! Please write more!!!!! I would love to hear how mom grows into a tigress sexually.

I found it a touch unbelievable. I would think that even a "southern church wife " would have a firmer grip on her sexuality.

Good story. Keep it cumming. Thanks.

Can't wait for more of her learning to be a sexual being....

The story deserves continuing to a real conclusion. Can't give it a 5 when it's not done.

The story was a bit hard to believe but it sure got my cock hard. I think you might have been able to show your mother's repressed sexuality a little more at the beginning. I could somewhat see what you were alluding to, but many readers are not so perceptive. Otherwise it was a very well written story. Please do write more.

I had to give you a 5*for this chapter, but I expect you to finish the story.

Please?

Can't wait for the next part

Can't wait for Chapter 2!

you had her TRASHING instead of thrashing. I am afraid trashing just tarnished the image too deeply for me (made me think of a TRASH HEAP not some sexy woman) so I lowered my vote from 4 to 3 *. I normally take mistakes like that in stride but like I said, just one letter ruined the image of what the author was trying to present.

Thank you for the excellent read. I do hope you continue this story line. The possibilities are almost endless. The way you told this story does not preclude its going in any direction you want to go.

If you do not have the next chapter ready to post, then you're nuts. This story is so effing hot. Hurry with the next part. 5++++

it would've helped a lot if "baby" had a first name. Really, author, why not give the boy a name?

You gave this story a very natural and plausible development. It was very comfortable, even soothing. Reading it was like eating rich mashed potatoes with dark brown gravy. Please continue; I'd like to taste the pot roast, too!

very good read ty keep up the good work

Very Good Read and great storyline, that definitely needs many more chapters!! Thanks for the beginning!!

My god I haven't read a story that hot on this sight in years. Please don't stop.

It's brilliantly put together I agree the guy needs a name though.

pleae contnue and add more than just one submission!

Unlike some stories this one seems credible and not contrived. Please write a follow on

Wow that was amazingly hot. Please, please continue with lots more. You really did a great job...can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Of course we want a sequel!!!! Yes! Yes!

Wow! Part two soon please ! So hot!

it left me dripping

I want to be her lol

Well done, look forward to the next chapter.

Waiting for the next part :-)

Well written, so loving, cool and sexy. So from me it is yes to the story so far(?) and a massive YES to continue.

What a shit .. No none there 'bullshit' but simply 'shit'..

A new generation of 'shaved' brains?

Generation who does not know, that you can have sex without alcohol and without a state of intoxicating effects of alcohol, and that over 40 years woman (as every other woman) can be just a NORMAL woman - rather than 'shaven' and 'smooth'??

Conclusion: - 'Plastic civilization' therefore and deformed brains..

Outstanding. The two characters seemed very real and three dimensional. You brought it along at a nice pace, not too slow or fast-well done. You almost slipped into making the guy into a lounge lizard, lol but added some humility to him just in time. All in all, nicely done-please part two (three?)....

SultrySouth.

Ignore the anonymous knockers, they haven't got the balls to criticise giving a name. Meanwhile, this is definitely a request for further chapters.

Cheers, Slithy.

I love the seduction aspect, it somehow heightens the pleasure for both parties. It even got ME gooey inside. Can't wait for chapter 2.

Well written story. Looking forward to part 2 or other stories from you.

Venus

CONTINUE ALREADY! Can't wait to see what happens next.

You have to finish the story! Great job!

Yes indeed, please continue with this story! It will be fun to see how she learns each new thing :)

finish it, make your mom know she is a very desirable woman, and take her to the heights of pleasure

Definitely needs another chapter, if not more!

Yes, please add to this story!

it was so good...more!!!

please continue!!

Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Excellent. You built an incredible but believable beginning (not all church goers are that strict and compliant). But - you simply must bring this story to it's logical conclusion or MAYHAPS string it along a little further. Keep them and us hanging a little longer for a more enjoyable CLIMAX!!!!!

Sultry, you have the talent. Keep writing, never stop writing.

Please more the story is 5+++++++++++++++++++++

& take your time. Pacing is just right for me. Pretty believable. Very hot. We know what will happen, & we can't wait! Later, broaden Mom's horizons, maybe- dress her sexy & take her out...take her to a swingers' club... fuck her in front of an audience... turn her into a total cockslut & make her love her new sexual freedom! ???????

PLEASE continue your story - it is absolutely incredible!! 5+++ stars

Very GOOD!

Now show her how you can use your mouth to please her.

Doesn't she need to learn how to reciprocate?

This story was really good, and I would love to see what is to come.

Well written , nice preview , excellent middle , with a wonderful finish . Well rounded , wish I had 1/10 of your talent .

I gave it 5 Stars .

Thanks awaiting more .

More....PLEASE GIVE US MORE!

I just can't wait for Chapter 2......really great read

More please. Great start

Great story chapter 2 please. Want to read more.......

This is a great mother/son story. Please continue with this story. Great job!!!

Great read, can't wait for chapter 2!

That has to be the greatest Son on earth. I hope that sometime the writer will finish the last of the story and the lessons. I think that she will blow her mind when he penetrates her with that fat 8 inches.

I'm soooooo wet right now...give me chapter 2!!!!:-)

Please ... keep the story going ... I am hard

Please continue the story.

Nice work here. Putting the Christian Right in to an unflattering position always improves a porn story.

My God, bloody hot first chapter. Please write many, many more.

So many facets could be explored.

And having access to a sex shop, you have to include bondage, or at least restraints.

Yes my mind is going crazy with posibilities here.

Nice writing, belongs in top 10% worthy of being called erotica rather than raunchy!

as a fellow magus and shaman of erotic pleasures aimed at mature ladies who were neglected or unfulfilled in life or marriage......i highly commend the details of your story.

i have done similar things so i don't see the narrative as "far fetched" at all.currently i have my exes mother as my older lover and we have done so much....from tender schooling to all out lust with explicit sex talk.

nothing beats this kind of story or relationship. we are older at 52 and 69 (my wfe was 5 years younger than me) and by bringing my MIL out of her christian habits i now have the perfect gentle yet wild at times love a well hung sensual and handsome man craves. kudos !!

This was a very good read. I enjoyed the tenderness. More erotic than pornographic. Need more like this here.

This was just hot! We have truely story here that begs to on. Your writing is excellent and you give just enough detail to make us want more. Good job, well done!

Oh yes you really need to continue this story line, well written and very fun to read and remember the days past with my own Mom.

Please take it to the next level.

You know she now wants her son to make LOVE to her.

Him giving her Oral SEX and then making PASSIONATE Love together.

Love and Kisses, Maryann (10-08-2014)

a beautiful story, well told. these are people we care about and are happy for.

I really enjoy your writing style. I love the way you play with words. a nebbish lackey is not a term usually associated with Baptists. and if you are going to draw out a moment, doing it juuuuust a bit longer can be a tease.

What a fantastic story. I did not want it to end. I hope you continue it and your Mom is a very lucky woman to have a caring son like you. Just don't abuse it.

C'mon! Don't tease! Write some more, please!

So well written and extremely hot!!

more please

You can`t leave it there write some more, lots more.

She's your mom, but if her body belonged to anyone else, you'd want to be banging it hard. I can't help but look at my mom's great tits, and ass, and I have great lust for her hot body when I do. if she's not wearing a bra, you can always see her nipples poking out. At night when she's only wearing her nightgown and panties, I can easily make out her great form beneath. I began waking around the house in my boxers a lot, most of the time I have an erection tenting the front of them. I began to make a point of having a conversation with my mom when I was good and hard, and I'd catch glimpses of her looking at my hefty package. I started accidently forgetting to remove mother/son incestuous videos from the DVD player for her to find. Then I caught her staring at my hard cock longer than she had before, and I knew things were going to change between us.

Wow erotic and hot 5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Wow Erotic and Hot 5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Great build up and great happy ending. The pace was fantastic.

DON'T BE A FOOL, WHEN IT'S THIS HOT YOU DON'T ASK, YOU DO IT. IT WAS WELL WRITTEN AND A GOOD READ, NOW FINISH IT .T H A N K S

That was a brilliant story, when well the conclusion be finished because this CAN'T be the end??

Wonderful story. For the first time, I have read a role reversal incestuous love story. The son knows more about life and sex than the mother. With the utmost sensitivity, adoration, respect and love, the son teaches the mother about loving sex.. The son knows he is the only one who can provide his mother with the security, safety and unconditional love required for her to develop to her full potential as a woman and lover. Finally, this story truly reflects the personal damage fundammental religious ideology can do.

Great Story. He should get her pregnant. More please.