All Comments on 'Show Me Your Smile'

by Fellfrosch

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
WILDLY SEXUAL CONNECTION

You picked it up and ran with it. Pretty good character motivation in just a few paragraphs. I like it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I couldn't help myself

I couldn't help myself... I enjoyed your story so much I came ;-))))

moimeme68moimeme68over 2 years ago

Great, but too short.

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