All Comments on 'Show Off'

Great story, PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!! I dont know how many people have read this story,but I cant beleve anyone has not posted feedback on this story!!!!! The more I read your story, the bigger & harder my cock got!!!! And yes I jacked off! But I guess that is why you write & I read. I wish you lived next to me !! You could be Haley and I would be Mr. Parkman. Thanks again!!!!!

What a fuckin' hot story that was. I was kinda hoping that the wife would be involved in some way. I thought she just may have been jerking her husband as they watched Haley finger herself. Then I thought she just may be waiting for them as they had their first fuck. Please continue this story line and include his wife.

You MUST continue with this storyline!!! It was HOTTTTTTTT!!!

It had a good buildup, but the actual sex seemed rushed near the end. Still, I'd like to see the story progress.

WOW WHAT A GREAT STORY. SHOW OFF. LOVE THE BUILD UP TO THIS VERY EXCITING EROTIC SEXY STORY. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT

PART TO CUM.

Very good story. It was great from beginning to end. Can't wait to read more ^_^.

It's like you know every one of my buttons and push them one by one. Another wonderful story by Lily Ann. Can't wait to see where this one goes.

Lily Ann

I want to read about how the Parkman's use you together

This is one of the best. I loved your description of Hayley showing off for Parkman knowing but not quite knowing that he was watching. I'd liked to read more about Hayley and Parkman fooling around with his wife watching. That is a very exciting concept.

Parkman taking her to the motel/hotel was kind of a turn-off, since he had his wife's acquiescence, I would have liked it better if he'd taken her home.

This is a very exciting and strokin' story.

you seriously have the best stories ever. Please right more with older men. I'm in love with these stories!!

wow what a very exciting hot horny story.

reading this was such a real turn on i was hard from start to finish would love another part of this out standing story.

brilliant writing awesome very hot story

I really wish stories like this where the girl has no clue about using protection would be written with that question asked and the man showing enough respect to care for the young lady by using a condom. I mean, yes, fantasy and all but in a "first time" story it comes off as the guy is a total shark , a cad to not include that for her own good. It actually ruins the read for me not to include a man's consideration for her well being.

Why didn't the missus get involved! Man this is a hot story!

that was very hott

Wow I like this too

A older neighbor takes his younger

virgin neighbor for her first time. Just

wish that I had a cute woman like that

to get her in my bed for her first time.

I would love to read more stories about Haley.

Perhaps with friend's, at college, or an orgy at her house with the Parkman's where her parents walk in on them?

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That story was just fucking hot. That’s all HOT!!

I seduced an older guy when I was younger he taught me things that I loved❤️❤️❤️

Loved it...was able to Educate a few Young Ladies back in the day...very few Vaginal Virgins BUTT Many More Anal Virgins!