All Comments on 'Shower Time'

Your voice is so sexy and this story is incredible! Got me so hot

That second person point of view is so rare but so hot!! It's like you're narrating my every move instead of some character.

Sounds like Randall from "Clerks" telling a hot story. The metaphors were awesome.

Dude that was hot... Looking forward to your next adventure

Hot story to read and listen to. I hope you some more. Thanks!

Do more stories!! Sexy voice!!

Prison rapes turn me on.Ejaculation is one of the fun things of being a guy.

Got my juices flowing! And left a wet spot too!

Oh my gosh...I blew my load so hard!! Thank you!

This story is so GOOD!!!!! The bodybuilder and the swimmer getting it on in the showers! And owning the twink’s ass by the end! This needs a sequel

that was so hot!! Look forward to more hopefully someday

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Ultra hot; my hard cock is raging. You can do me in the shower (or anywhere else) anytime!

... that makes me want to go from being straight bicurious to becoming a fully committed bottom sub. If anyone wants to message me to discuss, I will be waiting for you

Do guys ever 'splash'?

I can wank and fuck,but I never 'splash'.

There should be a sequel to the story.

That was surprisingly great. This writer articulates lust well

Fucking hot.

SOOOO HOT!!!!!

Didn’t care for it. Story was hot but the terms were too basic and it felt like you were reading it off the page. It didn’t sound natural. I prefer dirtier terminology and more of a backstory. But the main thing was it sounded like you were just reading it quickly off a paper. Feel the passion and let it flow thru your voice. Don’t be so sharp and clear, be raspy and seductive. But all in all great story.