All Comments on 'Showing My Sister Pt. 01'

This boy is a weirdo

Definitely a favorite writer rocking my world. Keep up the great work.

Zach quit being an ass. Sharing a submissive who will do what you want not good. Keep her for your own.

Good work Vanessa, well done; as always.

When a story is not to your taste, please stop reading it. If you think you know how the author can improve for the future then by all means provide CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Don’t assume that you speak for all the readers and then declare the story trash or stupid in the comments.

Remember, this website is not a paid subscription, and you are not entitled to a story tailor made to your likes. The author is writing purely for their own enjoyment.

Honestly, some people on here are expecting prize winning fiction... Unless it's got subtle characters and depth, they'll dislike it. Those people need to get over themselves.

Yes, the premise is ridiculous, but erotic fiction does not need to be serious. If you take it as I think it's supposed to be- namely something a bit silly and light but enjoyable for people who like light control, exhibitionism and group stuff, then it's fine in those lights.

ignore neg comments, people who read a whole story that they don't like, are actually mental, Please write more, Thanks

Loved this story, thanks much!