All Comments on 'Shown Off Ch. 01-03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent!

Can't wait to read more!

RecHikerRecHikerover 4 years ago
I gave you 5 stars - even for the short story -

Although your story is too short for my liking - I look forward to the next chapter and more accidental exposures in the woods. Thank you for sharing -

RecHiker

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Aah!

I'm coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I like your story. It's sexy and racy and clearly you got off on having your limits pushed.

nolaguy58nolaguy58over 4 years ago
More, please

Sarah, I enjoyed your story and look forward to reading about the development of your character in embracing her submissive tendencies and exhibitionism.Thanks for sharing. Please write more.

kalodinkalodinover 4 years ago
Not Bad At All

Obviously you intend to write more. Surely you've written a good deal for yourself and perhaps to treat selected friends? Your tail tale is too sure, too literate for you to be sharing here your early effort. On the other hand I may be all wet. But it is easy to imagine you and your young lover rabbit-ing away on a hiking path as you gather material for your next brief vignette. I'll be watching for it. Kalodin

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsabout 3 years ago

Wow! Amazing story! It's one hell of an exhibitionist story. 5* ~~ JB Edwards

HitchhikerHitchhikerabout 3 years ago

Yes!!! We'll talk.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I can see how a woman would love it knowing her man is crazy for her, and then loving it even more knowing he’s even more crazy for her enough to show it In public with the thrill of be discovered by others! I knew someone like that!

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