All Comments on 'Shudder Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
this was hot

please make a spinnoff story about their adventures in college!

freakydaughterfreakydaughterabout 6 years ago
I agree with anon.

Yes a spinnoff is all set up. Derek should try being a cheerleader or a professor.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More please

Thanks for finishing, so many stories on here start and don't end.

This has definitely got potential for so many more adventures for these characters, so any spin offs or follow ups will be greatly appreciated.

Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
sequel

off to college we go ! hopefully Derek get his body back eventually :P

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I’d really like to see more of this.

Ryanx360Ryanx360about 6 years ago
lol hinting at a sequel in the story?

"Hey," Nevyn said optimistically while zipping back up, "One story ends, another begins. We'll all be back together before you know it. Say, fall break."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Neat

This was a really well made story. And it was weird because the main character shared my name. But anyways, keep doing what you do best.

DummyaabbDummyaabbabout 6 years ago

Really enjoyed this, and hoping for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

really like this series. i hope that the author would make a sequel of this st

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Best story on the site.

This is the best story I have ever read. I mean it, I was supposed to prepare for an exam. Instead I spent all day reading. It just hit my fetish strait on. Thank you good sir. Thank you.

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First chapter of a new bodyhopping mind control story on outfoxstories called Working Remotely. Each chapter will be exclusive there for a month.

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