All Comments on 'Shuffling Freddie'

by Cromagnonman

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DanielQSteele1DanielQSteele1over 13 years ago
Damn!

You're on a roll. Sad and moving and hot and believable. And a happy ending after all. It doesn't get much better than that.

MattblackUKMattblackUKabout 11 years ago
A sad but 5* read

Thank you for writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
WHAT A SAD SAD STORY

to think he saved himself for her only for the one person we are supposed to be able to trust was nothing but a Lothario going around fucking any women he could find.....the church is so full of hypocrites....and the poor man pined away for his lost love...still loving her to the very end.....at least the girl grew up to be good....

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I'm a pretty normal average male, chronologically well over 18 but psychologically I'm not so sure. I have been writing as a hobby for many years and now that I have time on my hands I am looking to become more professional at it. I enjoy reading, morning walks along the river...

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