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All Comments on 'Shy Roommates Finally Fuck'

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RabbitmoonRabbitmoonalmost 3 years ago

Nice story, liked the two pairing up like this. Keep writing!

bshell47bshell47almost 3 years ago
Great story, but a BETTER ONE if they stayed together.

Too short. Wish there was more build up and more "After Glow".

How did they meet and become roommates. How long had they been together.

As before, why didn't they stay together.

Better ending and add more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A good story by why add the end bi t about break apart no needed should have left it open for a possible part 2.

It would have been better with more build up and been both their 1st time

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The last paragraph dropped my score a star

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