by enter_golgotha
Too short. Wish there was more build up and more "After Glow".
How did they meet and become roommates. How long had they been together.
As before, why didn't they stay together.
Better ending and add more chapters.
A good story by why add the end bi t about break apart no needed should have left it open for a possible part 2.
It would have been better with more build up and been both their 1st time