All Comments on 'Shy Sister'

PLEASE CONTINUE AND MAKE IT LONG IF POSSIBLE

Can't wait to see what happens next.

I liked it. I hope there’s more to come. I like the sound of Clare.

Meant to tap two. I hit three. My poor aim gave your post one more star than I intended.

please write more. Great start, so many directions you can go.

This story has the potential to make something different than the cliche.

Some ideas. Lily tries to tempt her brother. To show him she’s better than Clare.

I liked this story as far as it went. If that's all there will ever be then I'm disappointed.

The story didn't make me feel horny. It would be a good story, if the sister was made to join them, I think. Keep on writing!

I thought it was extremely hot and left me wet reading it. You don't often see cuckquean stories where it's a sister being cuckqueaned.

You need to add a chapter or two. This was a mild buildup