All Comments on 'Sian and Her Twin Sister Ch. 01'

Gave it four stars, it was a nice build up and had some very believable emotions and fears in the main characters. The family as a whole is very realistic.

Very good start, looking forward to reading the following chapters.

A lovely sweet start

I like the slow sensual buildup and the exposition !

nice start but to short maybe a thousand words short but a very good start