All Comments on 'Sibling Love Ch. 02'

You better keep going.

Great story, plenty of credibility and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Wholesome stuff, looking forward to more of this and other stories if you are going to write any. A little family drama in this story would be fun to read but even without the drama this story doing fine as it is.

Another great chapter. They keep falling more in love. Thanks for your time and imagination.

This is an excellent story. Please continue it as they have babies and grow old together. Mom and Dad won't mind, in fact they'll say they saw it coming.

One of the best stories I've ever read. Thank You so much. Hope that story is going on with lovebirds, maybe friends and parents are going to suspect something... maybe pregancy comes to the picture and so on. Keep going!

sizzles and the sibling romance just makes it better.....five stars all the way

I still think you're pretty inexperienced, but you're definitely a top class writer. One of my questions that keeps throwing me off is you describe your sister as petite, then as curvy, heavy breasts, ample butt. I don't think you can have both. I will say I like the fuller description better than the adjective "petite". Reminds me of my ex. She was 5'1" , 110#, 36-25-37 with DDs. Super multi orgasmic. Which brings me to my next complaint. Women, unlike men, can cut (with a u) multiple times. Don't get up from between those things until she begs you to stop.

Mom has set them up. Does Mom have experience with incest? Did Mom fuck her brother, father and/or cousin? Dad doesn’t know, And he will be upset. But he will do as Mom tells him. I don’t want to involve Mom sexually with her kids. But, I do want Mom’s backstory.

5 stars good continuation and onto the next chapter.

Good premise continues.

But too much conversation that doesn't really say anything.

And there's sex, but it doesn't get into the nitty-gritty details. It says what's being done, but not how. Not enough explanation of what each is feeling while the other is doing something to the other. How is he reacting to touching her pussy? How is she feeling/reacting while he's doing it? Would he/she like it done faster? Slower? Differently? Harder? Softer? Is each anxious to cum ASAP? Is the feeling so good that they'd like to continue, to stretch out the time until they cum?

Four stars.

Okay, so he pulls into the driveway at their house and parks his dad's truck. He then picks up his sister and carries her inside. Then he proceeds to focus his entire attention onto her letting thousands of dollars worth of guitars, amplifiers, and God only knows what other gear get ruined by the weather because he left it in the truck...

Or maybe a grizzly bear stole it....

But seriously, that small omission damaged the story just a little bit. Two short sentences telling Ellie that he would be back quickly and unloading the gear would have been nice. Hell, just leaving it in the foyer for later would have been better. I still gave you a 4/5 and I'm looking forward to reading more.