by Larzeranna
I first just browsed through that chapter and immediately realized I would love it. So I started with the first two chapters before reading this one here. This whole series is excellent, so very good! I love everything about it: characters, pacing, dialogue, action - and it is so well written, a jewel of erotica!
These two sibling lovebirds are simply adorable, I so root for them! Above all they are very believable!
Please, please go on, I already look forward to seeing what Ellie has bought to surprise Adey and what will transpire on their weekend getaway. Cannot wait! Thank you!
Can't wait to read the next chapter. The characters are so well written!
I love this story. I have read all 3 chapters and I like the characters and the way you have them together. I like the dialogue and banter between them. I like the progress and flow of the story. I feel the emotions as their love deepens. I look forward to many more of your installments. Thanks for your time and imagination.
Another great chapter! Aden and Ellie are so great together. Looking forward to the next chapter and more!
Well paced hot and romantic. Very cool, exactly what I was looking for.
Keep this story going. It is on my watch list for more activity.
I find it extremely difficult to stop reading this and I'm hoping you continue and finish the story.
Thank you all for the kind comments, I'm glad that you're enjoying my work. Chapter 4 will be much, much longer and I'm still in the process of editing, so apologies for the longer wait.
Enjoy your style patients and ease you use to create the time and situation can't wait on next one you have an endless possibility so continue this enjoy your waiting on next chapter.
I truly love the story and the depth it goes. It's so much more than others of the same type. I feel like I'm reading a great book!
Good story, but too much of drama and talks, I wish it had more action and dares
i like the story but if im not mistaken shes supposed to be 21 right? then why does she talk and act like shes barely 18?
At this point I am sensing that both parents are well aware of what their kids are doing. The subtle hints that author has dropped about how mom is perceptive plus dad treats his son leaving early from work as if he were meeting with a girlfriend instead of his sister....if you're going to have the parents be receptive to their children loving each other, then I'm totally hooked. I really hope that you take it in that direction. 5/5 and thanks for the longer installment this time. Much better!
I agree with ScottishTexan….. the parents already know, and have been expecting it for a long time.