All Comments on 'Sibling Roomates'

by jglass

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lovesexyshoeslovesexyshoesabout 3 years ago
Great job!

Yes, more please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This story needs a part 2!

AzureAshAzureAshabout 3 years ago
Superb first story

You did a marvelous job on developing the bond between the (half) siblings. The way you built the characters: I loved it to the hilt. The biggest problem with this story is that it ends!

P.S. Never felt this elated after being rick-rolled :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Keep writing. Great start!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
More dammit

I need more of this story or else I will simply wither away and die.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Nice prmise

But too short.

She needs some action too.

She asked him what kind of porn he liked. What kind does she like? Why? What about it?

Four stars.

SaintisidoreSaintisidoreabout 3 years ago

I have to agree with everyone else. This story was just getting started when it ended. You need to add more chapters and really let that fire consume them both.

bshell47bshell47about 3 years ago
AWESOME start

Please continue

Can’t wait for the next chapter

juanviejojuanviejo6 days ago

Cinco Estrellas!

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