by jglass
You did a marvelous job on developing the bond between the (half) siblings. The way you built the characters: I loved it to the hilt. The biggest problem with this story is that it ends!
P.S. Never felt this elated after being rick-rolled :)
I need more of this story or else I will simply wither away and die.
But too short.
She needs some action too.
She asked him what kind of porn he liked. What kind does she like? Why? What about it?
Four stars.
I have to agree with everyone else. This story was just getting started when it ended. You need to add more chapters and really let that fire consume them both.