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Why do ppl write one page and call it a chapter? One page, well, not even an entire page here. It's like you're trying to draw out the story longer than it really is. If that was the intent, you could have actually wrote from their perspective on building up to what made them kiss,and what they felt in that moment,and then what they felt being caught by their mother. But either way,if you really don't have a longer story to tell then a page at a time, then just submit the entire story at once in completion. Cuz you already rushed straight into everything and said next lesson is intercourse,so I'm guessing the next chapter is basically it. So a 2page story, which is fine btw,but just a waste of time. I mean, I absolutely like the story,and you have a good storytelling writing, but I hate getting wrapped up into a storyline to be abruptly ended after a single page, especially knowing that I will probably forget about it before the next page is submitted,so basically wasting my time investing into a storyline. Granted, I read this story before, maybe not this one,per say,but the whole thing of Hippie parents teaching their kids sex ed and ofc the kids applying that lesson to each other. But nevertheless, still it's a good story, just would have been a lot better if short stories were complete and not broken up in a page at a time

I disagree a little with the other anonymous comment. Short isn't all bad. In fact, it's harder to write in the small than in the large. Every word has to count and move the reader forward.

Having read several of your stories, You put them together in smaller pieces. What's great is when each of the pieces tell their own story. What's better is when there is enough mystery of what went on before or will happen after to make us read the others.

When’s the next chapter coming.

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