All Comments on 'Siblings Ch. 03'

i really like the characters. i'm looking forward to chapter 4. hopefully soon! 5 stars.

And the sweet nickname calling. Somehow I doubt that much repercussion would come from the parents if they saw how cute they look and act together. Gave it a 5!

Are you going to continue this with additional chapters?

I know there are many complaints about your writing of their dialogue, but the beauty of their love for each other far out shines and exceeds anything that could be complained about!!

Loving this sexy tale and hope there will be more moving towards a very happy conclusion for these two lovebirds. Don't ruin it with outsiders getting involved.

please keep story going -dont leave it like this

I appreciate all the comments on this story. I’m still not sure where this is going. The physical separation when Tim goes to college is a challenge.

GM01

Yup now the obstacles like distance, not getting caught etc come into play. Good luck. You could just leave it as is of course. If not do they break up due to long distance relationships never working? Do they get caught? If the persevere how? Whatever you right thanks for the good stuff so far.

Nice story. I like the characters and the fact that your fleshing them out. I saw some minor grammer mistakes, but they didn't take away from the story line. I suppose she is upset with him going to college and it will be hard for her. I'm sure that active mind of yours will figure something out for her. Looking forward to reading more about their love and experiences. Thanks for your time and imagination.

and hot enough for us readers who love it to leave it hanging like that.....keep going please and let their love beat the odds of long distance and make them go back to each other in the end...I know a good writer never abandon his story especially one as good as this.....hope erotica would inspire you to add more chapters to the siblings lover and their hot story.....I even missed the typos and what not....five stars all the way