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"Jealousy is an ugly emotion."
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Author's note; Well hopefully you can start to feel the momentum starting to build as the day Megan is due to give Mark her answer closes in and the games between the two are escalating. I hope you enjoyed the brief glimpse of yet another member of Mark's group; Victoria Redding. For those keeping track Redding joins Abigail Lefay, Alex Warner, and Allison Saunders (Breaking of Allison, Almost Perfect) as members of Mark's group which will be my next project. As a tease I will introduce one more member before SWB is over.
Now as for next chapter? Well the things really escalate as Megan finally discovers what happened between Mark and Doug. 8 more chapters to go.
On another note I have to say rather I was rather disappointed in the votes/comments on chapter 31 or to be more precise the lack thereof. 31 actually received quite a few more views than the last few chapters telling me more people read it. However, I got far less in the way of votes and comments. I mentioned at the end of "At the feet of my mother" that this is obviously a free site and the only payment we authors get is through votes/feedback and comments. My chapters are fairly long so if you have read this far please take the additional few seconds to vote and if you really enjoyed (or for that matter hated) anything in the chapter please let me know either through a public comment or the Lit feedback form. As always thank you for reading! Lovecraft68
- COMMENTS
4chuckssite4 months agoWhat the hell? Twice my comment has disappeared before I finished it. I can’t repeat it anymore so I’ll just say that introducing new characters is not helping the story but is providing Megan more opportunities to play the bitch and drive a wedge further between her and her brother, not to mention her own family. She has totally screwed up her life, but appears to get rich in spite of herself. But how will this resolve? Only 7 more chapters to find out.
taco1085over 2 years agowhen I think the story could not get any better you write this. wow, amazing detail and plot.... what a read. thanks
Devilbobyabout 3 years agoMy thoughts about this story it is long, very long, complicated , very complicated , and easy to lose your way , but isn't that like real life. I find it intriguing, and full of puzzles. But the sex is good, intense, not fun like so many other stories on this sight. So I shall keep coming back for more. But I notice that Victoria Redding never made any comments on Megan's obvious beauty, even though it is mentioned more than once in most chapters. I would have thought beauty of that strength would transcend even jeans and t-shirts.
columbus4phunover 7 years agoFor the past few months I have been reading SWB. Digesting, taking my time, and following what I hoped to read like a fetish novel with interesting characters, unbridled sex, and a memorable climax. I have voted at the end of every chapter but as of yet, had not added any comments. Typically, I wait for the final scene to drop before assessing the overall imprint the material has left on me.
Today I am commenting for several reasons. Without going into detail I just want to share my personal feelings of what I have read so far. While I usually read simple, short stories for personal self-gratification I have chosen to read longer chapter stories by writers I have come to enjoy. You, LC, have become one of my absolute favorites on this site.
The characters in this story are alive and can be anyone we pass walking down the street. The story lines have detailed the lives of two individuals and I feel like I have watched them growing up. I have become invested in their futures, aroused by the success in work and bed, saddened by their misfortunes and failures. Saying that this story has me riveted would be a gross understatement.
I read 6 to 8 books a month. As an avid reader, I use this time to unwind from long days at work and to just lose myself in someone else's world for an hour or so a night. When I find someone/something I like I stay with it and read everything that person has to offer in the series or other writings. The highest compliment I can pay to you and I hope it is taken by you as the utmost flattery of your writing is: I have found myself saying that this should be a book and the author could write novels for a living. I would read anything that was released in that form and follow the author in any endeavor they chose. I do hope that you feel the sincerity in that compliment. Unlike you (but I am trying and plan to release in the near future), I am not as elegant with words and when writing something as simple as this comment I am unsure if my words are doing my mind and heart felt feelings justification.
Is there anything that I would have done different or things that I would change? As far as the story, I wouldn't change a thing. The story is real and can be happening next door. The characters are alive and sitting at the next table in the restaurant sharing supper. The sex is and will be fantastic. The only flaw is that with numerous sex scenes in 30+ chapters, it becomes hard to write sexual scenes that haven't already been said or done. Not every scene has to change but descriptions and actions can be reworded so they don't sound like something you read in previous chapters. This is a small critique and one that I wouldn't know how to change if could get to the point of writing something this long.
Please know that I am a fan: almost obsessed with this story and where it is headed. Thank you for your time and the effort you put in to this work of art. As long as you continue to write I will continue to be amazed at your creations and will continue to be an avid reader and fan.
Keith
columbus4phun@yahoo.com
Anonymousabout 8 years agoSad to say I have read all of these SWB chapters so far and found most interesting but am now very confused as to what
A lot of the previous chapters have to do with this story
A very old guy
