All Comments on 'Sick'

by MrIllusion

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Great start, and so much room for this to continue and expand. The mom could very easily become part of this with so many ways she could find out, or already know, or have been playing with the daughter all along during the baths and planned this whole thing.

I look forward to seeing where you take this.

patrick918patrick918almost 8 years ago
dad with a daughter ..

WOWW !! im also a dad with a daughter . and i cant say things like this havent crossed my mind .

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10almost 8 years ago
Fast Paced - Terrific

Loved the way this story moved from one segment to another seemlessly. Great writing skills.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
very hot

please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Editing...

"Her big, large breasts..."

That's a bit redundant, and also repeatitive.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Excellent...

...right up until "I lied there" in the last paragraph.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good story

Aside from grammar/spelling, a nice story. Keep it up.

RichardGRichardGover 6 years ago

Yes you need to do at least a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Very erotic! I could feel myself sliding into the daughter's pussy with your description and it made me hard thinking about it. Mmmmm!

DaddysgirlflDaddysgirlflover 4 years ago
So hot

Wet panties story

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