All Comments on 'Sick Day'

An unusal theme for a story. It was well thought out. My only negative critisism would be that the flow of the story was too fast. By that I mean if you had been a bit more descriptive and had added some spicy detail you would have a great story. Well done

This could have been a good story. The conversation was stilted and very false. There were some grammatical error that were blaring. GET AN EDITOR.