All Comments on 'Sick Like Me'

Such a great story

...that you wrote a man like Zack into existence, but I can never have him. I kinda hate you right now.

I loved the way you infused such a strong and distinct personality into Jude. For me, that's one of the most important ingredients in a story--especially one told in first person.

It bummed me out that Zack had had a vasectomy, but I gave you 5*, anyway. ;)

Thank you! Sometimes I hate myself for making these kinds of guys up but what can I say? I love forming characters, especially ones that are similar to myself and dream boats. :)

At least Zack and Jude found an activity they both enjoyed after spending time at a dull, drab reception.

Since the two of them have similar interests, there will probably be more sparks between them in the future. Sequel--how about a sequel? Tell us what happened next.

"I moaned into his mouth and he swallowed it up, using his tongue to slither gently across my teeth. The sound of his piercing skittering over bone had me gripping his shoulders even more."

Teeth are made of enamel, not bone.