All Comments on 'Side Dish Ch. 03'

I remember reading this story nearly a year ago and remember how much I liked it. Great potential. But after so long a hiatus, I assumed it wouldn't be continued, which I thought was a shame. Glad to see this follow-up chapter.

Love the story and glad you continued. Wonderful character development. Many ways you can go with these two. Anxious for next chapter. 😀😀😀

Loved the way you put this story together and awarded it a 5 star. The bathroom scene was really hot then Rose and Julia making love for the first time was very erotic. Would so love to read more of these two as their love grows into a lovely womanly love story with lots of emotion and with Julia taking some control over Rose, by making her eat her pussy in places other than their apartment. Please keep this interesting story alive with many more chapters, the girls deserve it.

So happy you have come back, and with another great chapter.

Great job!

Doc

Totally awesome writing Mallory. I was reading this & becoming insanely aroused, wet. Your character development has a stunning depth to it, the narrative is rich in plot &subplot, the intensity of Ross's sexual identity quandary is gorgeously written. And then there's the sex. Wow! I started reading this in a restaurant & am grateful I'm a woman because if I were a dude I'd be tenting my shorts. Holy mother of God, your writing is amazing. I can only hope for a 4th installment cumming soon.

I love the interplay between the two stories. Rose is very hot and the possibilities of her meeting up with the two sexy ladies from your previous dale is very tantalizing! Can’t wait for what is next!

I liked this story and also would like to read Cheat Days too.

I love reading all types of stories on this site, but yours are particularly amazing. You give great depth to the characters and include intimate details which allow the reader to visualize the scene and almost sense the happenings as if watching it unfold. Truly wonderful writings from someone who obviously is in touch with their intimate self and has a great sensual erotic knowledge base of experience!

I hope to read many more offerings from you very soon.

This is great reading so please don't keep us waiting for too long before continuing

Have been missing your writing for almost a year...

This chapter is great! Rose is fighting to realize her feelings. And the doubt of Julia's feelings is begining to tear her appart. Sensual and Insightful all packed in a short story. 5 Stars.

Can't wait for Side Dish and Cheating Days next instalment. I hope it will be soon.

I really enjoyed this story, and hope you're planning a chapter four? Thank you for sharing this with us!

Like the complexities...

This is very good. Sad to see it end...

Oh my, I sure hope you continue, this is very good ;->

Love this story and how it developed with these two finding themselves after so many years. The catch though is that you left your fabulous story before you move it to a conclusion. What happened, did they stay together after college as a loving couple or did they to their own way. Should have finished this story as it has been a pleasure to read. Reminds me of me!!!! Rekindle your skills, shaped your pencil or get a new pen and start this story again. Also, your other story left the reader hanging also. Did Eva save her or did the bitch continue to dominate? Please finish both with many more chapters. Thanks

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With the characters developing nicely, further chapters begging!!!!!