All Comments on 'Side of the Road'

Very good first entry to literotica. *warm smile* Keep up the good writing and possibly look into an editor from the site to help with minor grammar and spelling issues. Otherwise, it was a very good start to what could be a great story. Good job.

pretty enjoyable, please keep it up

Come on, take some pride and take your time and add a lot more detail to a very good basic story-line.