All Comments on 'Silent Flame'

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Rainyday493Rainyday4935 months ago

Your writing kept me hooked, the eventual sex was worth the wait, too!!

Fenris420Fenris4205 months ago

Wonderfully unique. What a great stroy and well-told. 5/5* Fav

EzraCarmichaelEzraCarmichael5 months ago

I enjoyed reading this.

stewartbstewartb5 months ago

A thoroughly enjoyable story !

Doommachine11Doommachine115 months ago

Loved the story would like to see more chapters of him learning the language, them experiencing troubles etc. good story

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

A great effort and a different perspective.

Well done.

AreradArerad5 months ago

Awesome story, thank you!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

An interesting tale.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This is wonderful! A few spelling mistakes but overall the message was clear and well written!

JAFCritic3JAFCritic34 months ago

This is an incredible story. Thank you for sharing it. As for English not being your primary language, you did well.

NkwaziNkwazi4 months ago

I was entranced. And fascinated that you took the thought and time to come up with a solution that didn't just involve "magic". Great job.

walnutspitwalnutspit4 months ago

Amazing storytelling. You had the best possible outcome for you mismatched lovers. I wish all of us in the real world could just take a lesson and see what really matters. Thanks again

BoredInQuarantineBoredInQuarantine4 months agoAuthor

Wow. I am amazed at how much praise this story got. I want you to know I really value all your comments. It helps show there are actual people behind all the numbers and statistics. Thank you all! As well as anyone else who might wish to add their two cents, good or bad. It always helps!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

really nice build up and pay off, good to see he was naturally hesitant with everything new, but willing to go for it when needed. hopefully you make more such stories. length was good, didnt overstay welcome or too quick. prob would like a bit lonegr. also this dynamic, human male with big nonhuman female is done well

NovaMNovaM4 months ago

I severely liked this dragon’s tail 🐉🌺 Please give us more, pretty please 🙏

Have a nice day 😎🤩

Brian798Brian7984 months ago

oh so brilliant I love dragons, so so jealous my favourite story please more story .

rbloch66rbloch663 months ago

A beautiful story! Very touching and heartwarming.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This was absolutely incredible. Beautiful and sexy! Thank you!!!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Amazing story. Would have been even more interesting if some parts of it were through the perspective of the dragonness. I enjoyed this story. It is very well put together.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Really Fantastic! Great pacing and storytelling. You did a brilliant job of humanizing Eishe and making her relatable as a woman. A continuation of their romance would definitely be appreciated. Bravo!

KerrionKerrionabout 1 month ago

Excellent!!! I'd LOVE to see a continuation of the story, perhaps starting with "it's been 2 years since...". Maybe telling how he learned her language, and her his. Struggles faced against the Orcs, his desire to be with humans again. Maybe finding a shipwrecked human girl and how it would play in the story. Perhaps even the possibility of a new half-breed race of dragon and man? Smaller than a full dragon, but just as strong, faster and more cunning?

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