All Comments on 'Silent Seduction Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
first chapter of a keeper!!!

The words became a painting in my mind...I love the way this story starts and the character development is absolutly brilliant.I look forward to reading more as they come,thank you

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
A wonderful beginning.

You've weaved a promising and engaging first chapter. I look forward to the next installment.

sexmatesexmateabout 19 years ago
These words are art!

Please continue! You have my attention! The imagry is spectacular!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Intrigued.

Your first chapter has caught my attention and now I must shamelessly beg for more. I am eager to see where you take this. Wonderful characterization and plot, wondering how you plan to heal them both.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
You have my attention now.

I too am intrigued by your first offering and now I am imploring you for more. It would appear at first glance that while the little slave is in desperate need of compassion her soon to be master requires her too. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Checking in again

I'm checking in again to see if you might have added another chapter to this story and perhaps I missed it. your first offering has already captured both my heart and my attention and I must now beg you to pleasse continue. I so wish to know what happens next in your tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
where is the rest?

Great now where is the rest?

Finish it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
oh please more

you wrote saying ..first thing that there would be more chapters...oh please write more you left it as a cliffhanger with no more..please write more soon.I love it so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
more chapters

there will be more chapters blah blah blah yeah right.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i loved it 5 stars

why you never wrote again ?

Archangel_MArchangel_Mover 2 years ago

A fascinating start. Unfortunate that it was never continued.

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