by Gwen81
The words became a painting in my mind...I love the way this story starts and the character development is absolutly brilliant.I look forward to reading more as they come,thank you
You've weaved a promising and engaging first chapter. I look forward to the next installment.
Please continue! You have my attention! The imagry is spectacular!
Thanks for writing!
Sexmate
Your first chapter has caught my attention and now I must shamelessly beg for more. I am eager to see where you take this. Wonderful characterization and plot, wondering how you plan to heal them both.
I too am intrigued by your first offering and now I am imploring you for more. It would appear at first glance that while the little slave is in desperate need of compassion her soon to be master requires her too. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
I'm checking in again to see if you might have added another chapter to this story and perhaps I missed it. your first offering has already captured both my heart and my attention and I must now beg you to pleasse continue. I so wish to know what happens next in your tale.
you wrote saying ..first thing that there would be more chapters...oh please write more you left it as a cliffhanger with no more..please write more soon.I love it so far.