by SilkenSlave
Loved your story, very erotic, kept me going and interested right till the end, hope to see more soon
you have a decent story, but i just cant stand the first/ second person perspective.
I would have liked it much better had you used either her name or a pronoun like "she" instead of "you".
Can't believe I missed this so many years ago! Powerfully erotic. Never thought of satin before, really, but I sure as hell do now!