All Comments on 'Silver-Eyes Pt. 01'

I don't know if English is your first language or not since you didn't bother with a bio. Your writing is atrocious, generally I can mange to read poorly written stories however not this one. Proofread and get an editor.

its easy to bad mouth someone who has written a story, its another story it they are able to write a story themselves. If they feel superior trying to tear someone down then I pity them when it comes judgment day. Remember, what you judge others on you will be judged.

as for the story, it has a good plot, lots of twists and turns. I got lost in the last paragraph but really liked the story. hope you continue the story and enjoy writing. dont listen to the negative comments, build from that and have fun...

Okay, Max. I agree that this work is shabby, it is poorly written and there are a ton of grammatical errors. But you will see the future chapters will be better. And I look forward to you critiquing me again. Also English is my first language but I come from a place with a lot of dialect and slang, it affects my speech and writing. But it doesn't matter cause I'm slowly improving.

Now on to my new favorite Mexican food, taco thank you for encouraging me. And would you believe me if I said the last paragraph also had me confused (I'm joking :x, it was just a poor closing)! I also do plan on continuing this and I'm also working on something else. Also I've decided to release my work in bundles, so instead of it being a pt. 1, it's be 1, 2 and 3. This way you get more content per release. I would try completing the whole book then release but I know myself better than that so I won't even attempt it, haha. Hope to see you again.

-McWulf