All Comments on 'Silver Lining'

by dnightshade

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tazz317tazz317almost 4 years ago
SHE WAS CUTE AND WASNT A GOLD DIGGER

just what the Doctor ordered. TK U. MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Cute and sentimental, . . .

but not much substance. The money will be enormous, and so will its influence in her life. As money tends to corrupt, and Kindra is very young, it is anticipated that it will corrupt both her and her son, for a long time. I with it were otherwise. And I can understand why you didn't want to tell the logical consequence of his actions.

Short and sweet, and shallow.

Thanks for the effort.

dmallorddmallordover 2 years ago

I enjoyed the sentiments of your story. Your writing is clear, concise and heartfelt. Thanks for sharing. Even in a tragic event you have included a silver lining for your surviving characters.

It is a bit of irony that I came to this one tonight. I spent a month in the hospital and just made it home. Still to weak to write again so I was checking on readers who had favored my stories - there you were - and here I am. Unlike Richard, I am expected to recover - though like Richard, I can see the end of life not too far in the distance as well.

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