All Comments on 'Silver Moon: Bk. 02 Ch. 11'

your story here had like 4-5 repeats im sure its easy to fix but thought i'd let you know....luv your story's and im sure others do too

Rissa

Very Easy Fix. Please go back and delete the repeats to make it more readable.

Horrible

I was most excited to see a 6 page addition, disappointment set in when I realized it was just a bunch of editing mistakes. I wait with baited breath for the next installment!

i was happy to read this because I was waiting. Out of the page 2 going into page 3 the story repeats itself. Its a easy fix.... can't wait to read more

But you crying freeloading want to be need to grow up and stop you repeat of bo ho it repeats. Its like the quear bitching about the fag.

Max bro great story cant wait for the next one.even if it repeats its a small price to payfor your awesome ass story.keep it up please.

I have uploaded the chapter again. Not sure why but when I originally uploaded it the document was goofed when it was posted.

Maxd01,

I am really enjoying the series but I do have a few recommendations.

1. This story series has so many characters its hard to keep them all straight. I would recommend you start a chapter with a list of the characters you will include in the chapter being posted along with their description and possibly their mate? Example : Danilo Legarith (Dan) - Alpha Male - Alucian pack, Mate Pam. That way we can refresh or memory of the characters

2. When you first started this series you were posting once or twice a month but only twice this year and the last time was about 4 mos ago. When posting that infrequently its hard to remember the details of the prior chapters. I have to go back and reread prior chapters to refresh my memory which I frankly don't have time to do. My recommendation is to post more frequently (once a month minimum) or wait to post a series until it is all written then post it all and let Literotica spread it out over days

3. If you want to continue to post very infrequently, then please make the chapters longer. 2 pages every 4 months disappointing. Example : There is another author that posts a fantastic werewolf series on Literotica (called South Mountain Pack) very infrequently but her chapters are huge. Her Chapter 16 was over 140 pages in MS Word 56K words

Keep up the great work..

Did the pages get mixed up - there are 6 pages but they keep repeating the same information. You get up to the alphas showing up and then you are starting over.

Yes I agree half way thru the chapter it repeats from the beginning

Another lovely chapter to savor! Give me more!! :)