All Comments on 'Silvertree Chronicles Bk. 01 Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Could be put in a better book

Why is this story here in literotica when it could be placed in a better site for books like inkitt/wattpad/radish....

EmotionalStormEmotionalStormalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Response to why here.

The answer is in my bio and the warning in each section. Because of the injuries I suffered I do not consider myself to be a professional writer. An author, yes. But with the health issues I also battle with depression at times. A professional who could make a living doing this, no. There are elements to my story writing that can be seen in other, better authors, like Etaski and Tiefler who I follow on occasion.

Both of whom who work to be professional writers and get professionally published on other sites. I don't have that attention to detail, but I do admire their work. Etaski has been moving her stories off to self-publish lately and she is talented. I came across this site and use if for therapy, to try and keep what remains of my mind on a task.

I have developed some Attention Deficit issues as well. I will write for one story-line, and then another as I lack focus at times. I write in 'spurts' if you will and then edit constantly trying to improve the story.

Catching hundreds of thousands of mistakes from word substitution issues, to grammar and syntactic issues, first and third person getting missed at times. What you just read was an updated and enhanced version with a lot more detail than the original published back in 2017. I write to share the stories for those who wish to read them.

When a writers block hits I revisit and do things like a complete Enhanced Edition of an existing story to add more depth to the story. While working through the block and deciding on a course for the other story arcs I have going. Champion of the Goddess, Aurora, and Vessel of Dark and Light are 3 other story arcs I have published on but have not completed yet.

That does not count stories I have not put up on the site that I have written. There are others. You want to understand what I am doing then read books 7 and 8. Next month, when the Enhanced Edition is in the short title, read them again as they will be updated.

Etaska and Tiefler do this with editors and publishers for a more polished book that they sell. I do it here and with the aid of 1 or 2 proof readers as I do not consider myself on par with their skills as writers. I consider it the truth, while some would consider it the depression.

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May 25th, 2022 -- The Astra storyline has been updated from the original dated 3 years ago. It corrected hundreds of tense issues with some additional or changed dialog to fix some consistency issues. The Aurora story and books 2-12 of the Silvertree line will be coming over t...