All Comments on 'Simons Mom'

by AJTomlinson

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dingusmcmingusdingusmcmingusover 2 years ago

Good story, well-paced with very hot action. I hope to read more about where things go from here, and maybe even find out Simon's Mom's name!

slide64slide64over 2 years ago

great story. keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Great story!

Needs a chapter two

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow that story was hot! A+ . I hope to see a chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

We need a sequel, this was amazing! And the writing was superb. The author only has one story, very impressive.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Wonderfully Done

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A Voyeur story done right. The exhibitionism was excellent too.

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This tail tops the lists of stories that absolutely need a sequel.

5 Star effort. Hope the author can get back to this. Again fantastic.

AJTomlinsonAJTomlinson5 months agoAuthor

Thank you all for your kind words. I am indeed working on a sequel to this story. My apologies for my absence this last couple of years.

If you enjoy my writing, I have written 2 more stories on here. They are currently pending publication by the editors. Hopefully they will be available to you very soon.

Once again, many thanks x

sbmcruisesbmcruise21 days ago

Really HOT. we desperately need that sequel.

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