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by Her_Toyboy

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Missy10256Missy10256over 8 years ago

5 and favorite story..both loving and erotic. Good job!

GaryArlGaryArlover 8 years ago
You know your way around the English Language

I like the care and attention you give to your word choices, especially important in a short piece like this. You did a great job of giving the reader a ringside seat. Hot stuff. I noticed this was posted much more recently than your incest story. I hope you're back to stay.

caradoc1960caradoc1960about 8 years ago

5 stars for your fabulous story, excellent phrasing and pace

and another 5 stars for the hard on it gave me!

ElectricBlueElectricBlueabout 8 years ago

Hot and efficient. That's great writing, made me throb!

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As much as I enjoy the stories on offer here, I find the site difficult to navigate and definitely not intuitive. Can any of you kind folks tell me how to change the image above? Not the avatar, but this picture on the bio page.