All Comments on 'Simple Seduction Ch. 02'

There's a pretty big gap between the end of chapter 1 and the start of chapter 2.

Continuity mistake: in Chapter 1, she has a BMW, in Chapter 2 it is a Mazda.

If you want to edit...send your email to the author and offer your services as editor. Stop harping about every little thing. I thought it was good. I am also enjoying Temptation's Kiss.

update update!!! :)

i think your story is refreshing... different... and have lots of potential... looking forwards for an update soon...

Your writing is awesome. I am immensely enjoying both of your stories. I am waiting for updates and checking every day. I have become hooked.

Surely there is going to be more - PLEASE