by lessthanperfect
oh, that has given me some serious goosebumps. geez you write well, i love the ying and yang of your main characters! i dont even need the erotic, its so nice.
I can sense their love-making sessions coming soon. They are falling in love, and Duke's opening up to Luke is a good sign. Can't want for them to undress each other, and for Luke to run his fingertips across the soft hair of Duke's chest.
You dear writer are a pearl of great price. This chapter was lyrical in poetic perfection. Duke finally had something to say and did so with graceful poignancy. A perfect ending to the chapter as Luke 'just sat and stared at him till the night was through.'
This chapter was so touching, I cant wait to read more.
Keep up the good work! :)
...sooo sweet and lovely :) Please let them be happy together soon!