All Comments on 'Sin'

Hi everyone, thanks for making it this far, this is my first story to test the waters, so please give me some feedback. Also, if you want to hear more from these characters, let me know, there's always room for Chapter 2

I give it 4 stars because there could have been a bit more detail to certain parts of the story I think. But it's not bad at all.

I rarely give 5 stars to a story. Well done.

I enjoyed reading this. Very much on the eve of 2019. Screw the bloody Negative Nancys who just can't enjoy any damn tale without bitching. Geeze Louise find another story to read and stop being schmucks people!!!!

Can't we try to start the year with some courtesy and generosity? It's a small thing to ask..... really.

Amazing work for a first time author! Keep writing!

FYI you should probably go ahead and delete the comment claiming your story is a repost. This person is a troll. For reasons I do not comprehend there exist a bunch of pathetic shit-bag trolls who have nothing better to do with their lives than leave brief, hateful, nonsensical comments on quality submissions such as yours. These are the ones that clearly are not constructive criticism, but clearly crafted and intended to infuriate. Don't tolerate these motherfuckers. Delete their filth when you see it.

I look forward to reading more from you!Thanks for sharing your amazing talent with us all!

Loved this, it kept me on the edge of my seat. I very much look forward to more.

Fantastic story! Very well written! It was a cross between Supernatural and fifty shades of grey. Enough suspense and romance to keep every one interested....Great job

You are right up there with my two favorite authors, Chelsea Quinn Yarbro and Anne Rice. Can't wait to read more

Great story. I need to re-read it since I wanted to get to the end. I read this due to your other story.

Wow, sure you can't get published? In a good story I don't care about the sex, I care about the plot and the writing. You knocked it out of the park.

Thank you....

Great story , man , but it has the potential to be the best. You just need to learn to pace yourself better. Go slow. Read celestial matters. Similar theme, but better put together.

It would have been cool if they had children or something, but I’m a sucker for that kind of stuff.

I was enthralled, from the beginning till the end!

The author expertly elicits emotions through his superb literary work: fear; indignation and anger; breathless anticipation; at times, laughter and happiness; and of course, relief and a sense of triumph from righteous justice.

Thank you, Joe!

So well written and an amazing story line. Thank you so much!

So, my eyes leaked for the first 60+% of the story, then I enjoyed the short bit of bliss before being assailed by chest-clenching anxiety, and finally got to let that held breath out and relax into bliss again... And none of that would have been possible without amazing characters and artfully crafted plot.

Like I've pointed out in many of my story comments, I am a hopeless romantic, so I could have liked this story no matter who told it. It was so impressively well delivered, though, that I am left in awe and kinda emotionally wrung out (in a good way).

Truly magnificent!

I have to say, I don't typically get drawn into stories on here, but you drew me in and kept my attention to the end!

Let's see, anger, pain, happiness, sadness, really cold shower and change of pants, furry, terror, and a huge wave of happiness.

What a ride, and I need a another cold shower.

Words can not do justice for this work of art!!

This story. You have set it up so beautifully to continue. Where does their story go, what about the two other women. The Antagonist was set up so perfectly. Does she ever get redemption or her wings back? 5+ stars.

I'l really looking forward to more adventures of Lord Asmodeus and his love, his doctor and his cook! So please continue and make it a story arc!

Outstanding!!! I know you're busy but please tell me a sequel is At least a thought.

Amazing story of a love that's able to traverse stereotypical boundaries!

Excellent as always. I still feel she trusted him a little too soon. I feel she needed a little more "healing time" story wise. she went from the shell shock of rape to sleeping in his bed awfully fricken fast.

Everything from that point on was pure gold however, even platinum.

Who sent the envelope???

Yes, there’s a couple of unanswered questions left there as per the previous comments, origin of the envelope and Estielle’s rapid transition from traumatised victim to lover, but the really big question is why is there an Angel named Vlad? I’m guessing Attila, Genghis and Adolf where all taken…

Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz, 5⭐️

The envelope isn't mysterious. Michael had the ring last--it was what proved Darren's love for Estielle to him. He quietly sent it back to Darren, symbolizing his (unneeded) blessing of the union, and peace between the two men.