All Comments on 'Sin of the Father...'

This was a most excellent story. Very well done.

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I really loved that story. Dude, please keep up the good work! I like your poems as well but this story was freaking awesome, i hope to hear more stories like this one.

what a perfect story you did I like it alot good going

From the impact of having her brother, the woman found what sex was like when a brother provides love and a large stalk of manhood to probe inside her body.

no girl would want to have sex and most likly would be to sore to be able to after being raped keep it atleast sounding believable and do some research next time

I really like your story. It was real touching how the siblings finally became one. I understand why the sister needed her brother to replace the pain with love. Though, I'm surprised it happened that night, but I understand it.

Keep up the good work!

Any woman that loses her virginity to a forcible rape does not wish for more sex. The trama and the pain and emotional stress would probably not allow this. too off the wall.

I don't get what's wrong with many of the authors. 10 inches cock...get the fuck real dammit! It sucks, it really sucks. And I don't think that any girl who was just raped is anywhere near of being horny. Unrealistic.

This is an excellent story, especially for an author who is only 18 to 22 years old. The love of a brother and sister, of a brother for his sis's pretty little twat and a sister for her big brother's big hard cock is a beautiful thing, and this writer has captured it in a flawless literary style.

The concept is good, the execution felt rushed.

Good concept but the execution was too rushed.

1. After being raped especially by a family member much less the father there's no way she would feel like having sex no matter how much love or affection she felt for someone.

2. The story should have been dragged out a little give her time to heal after the trauma of her "father" raping her.

3. The brother should have known that she would have been too traumatized for anything besides hugs for a while.