All Comments on 'Sin Pt. 03'

Would have preferred he keep the mother in law

I wanted to give at least a 4 and possibly a 5 but your bad spelling, lack of grammar and stammering phrases knocked it down to a 3. You are new to writing, at least on Literotica, so now is the time to make some positive corrections. If you can’t spell or make a clear sentence, get an editor or at the very least have some one read over what you write first. This story was good but you loose the reader who tries to decide what you are trying to say. Remember, this is writing not texting. You can correct mistakes before you submit.

Are females!

I guess this fits in with philtee's "Editor Please" comment.

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A prologue appears at the beginning of a story, usually as bit of an introduction. An epilogue goes at the end, as a conclusion, a final wrap-up.