All Comments on 'Sinful Needs of the Flesh Vol. 02'

From the caption, I thought this was just going to be a smut story about a man sleeping with his 2 cousins. But it evolved into something tender and romantic. Much deeper than I was expecting, was even somber at times. Good story worth reading again. Glad to see it had a happy ending.

Story, characters, descriptions...great.

Writing...rather poor. Serious problems with mismatched tense, wrong words, misspelled words, completely missing words.

I'm not going to claim it made the story a waste of time, but it caused me to have to recheck a sentence frequently. A decent proofreader may have caught most of these.

Even if im Not a native english speaker, i had my Little problems with the writing itself. But the Story was absolutely Great.

I dont Know how the laws about incest Are in the USA. Here in Germany its forbidden only for brothers, sisters and kids. So there is no problem for cousins and Otter siblings. Best example is Albert Einstein, WHO also married his cousin. And in france for example incest is legal since over 200 years. So while reading the First part, i wanted to suggest, that they shall go to some other countries where they had no problems.

I read this author's previous series, "Sharing My Wife Amanda", and thought those stories were sexy, daring, and descriptive.

But he topped himself with "Sinful Needs of the Flesh". More romantic than naughty, there is a powerful sense of love, tenderness, and heartbreak that I definitely did not expect. I would've paid money for these stories, too!

Amanda would be very jealous at Sami! ;-)

First cousins marriage is legal here in Canada and i believe the same is true for the states.

I loved that story the ending was a little heartbreaking and I was kind of hoping a reunion was going to happen.

I admit, I am a sucker for happy endings. (Yes that too!)

;)

V.

you write from the heart, and thus the emotion is transferred to the reader. Great job!

That was so sweet and lovely. Thank you for sharing the fantasy with your readers.