All Comments on 'Sinful Pleasures: My Friend's Dad'

by SpellcasterBeru

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chytownchytownabout 3 years ago

****Nice and complete flash story. Thanks for sharing.

DunkirkDunkirkabout 3 years ago

Brittney needs to make thomas a father

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

If Thomas is soaked in his wet clothing, is his shirt see-through that she can see his hopefully hairy chest? Does he take this soaked shirt off for love-making, does Brittany trace her fingers across his wet hairy chest? Details details!

JustanotherdirtyoldmanJustanotherdirtyoldmanabout 3 years ago

Well done! Well done, indeed! I hope there are going to be more like this! You're a very good writer. Character development, emotions, realism. All good stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Awesome! Chapter 2 & more

TwoRock1TwoRock1about 3 years ago

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too short.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Wow... I hope there’s moto cum with this one

Helen1899Helen18996 months ago

It was tastefully done, a lovely story 5 star, but we need an outcome

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