by SpellcasterBeru
If Thomas is soaked in his wet clothing, is his shirt see-through that she can see his hopefully hairy chest? Does he take this soaked shirt off for love-making, does Brittany trace her fingers across his wet hairy chest? Details details!
Well done! Well done, indeed! I hope there are going to be more like this! You're a very good writer. Character development, emotions, realism. All good stuff!