All Comments on 'Sins of the Father'

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chytownchytownabout 6 years ago
Good Read***

Thanks for sharing.

HighpikeHighpikeabout 6 years ago
Enjoyed that

A good read with an interesting potential for a sequel. Chance encounter with father.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
republished?

did you recycle this one? I don't remember it word for word, but don't see any major changes

goducks1goducks1about 6 years ago
i liked the story

good read. It needed a little more sex and seemed rushed at the end . it could use chapter 2. but the sex scene was well done. because you're a new writer on this site i pushed myself to give it 5 stars - hoping you'd try again!!

RanDog025RanDog025about 6 years ago
BEAUTIFUL STORY

ID GIVE YOU SIX STARS IF POSSIBLE. FAMILY IS A BIG PART OF MY LIFE SO THIS HIT CLOSE TO MY HEART! EVERYONE FAVORITE UNCLE. LOVE CONQUERS ALL. THANKS FOR A VERY WELL WRITTEN STORY!

bee49bee49about 6 years agoAuthor
Republished?

Yes I republished it from an account I had on here before. It says in my bio.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very Nice

Though it did seem to be a bit rushed in spots it was still a great story in my opinion and hope to see more from you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Will you continue this ? Perhaps he's instrumental in bringing his father to justice (by joining the FBI maybe).

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakalmost 6 years ago
Disappointing ending

I was disappointed in the ending. I was hoping that his father would be caught and sent to prison.

chaniseaustinchaniseaustinabout 5 years ago
My First

This was the first incest/taboo story that I've read and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for introducing me to a whole new subgenre and not creeping me out in the process!

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Love the story. AAAAA+++++

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I've published on here a few times under a couple of different usernames before deleting my account but im back for good this time. So for all of you who were waiting for me to finish 'Man of the Mountain'. Your wait will be over soon. Probably won't finish 'Samantha'.