All Comments on 'Sins of the Father Ch. 03'

Fabulous imagery, good flow. The characters and their relationships are believable and I think this is down to the dialogue - I love good, natural dialogue in writing. It’s the ultimate foreplay as far as I’m concerned. The build up to this series is also enjoyable......a hard skill to master but you do it really well. The end was funny too. Thanks!

I love the way you take your readers along on the journey of love and exploration of the human mind and body. Taking the time to go where you're lead and keeping control to not take things further than they need and bringing it all back to the love that's shared. Wonderful story, thanks

I really loved how this story went. You didn't go too crazy with getting her pregnant or anything. I kinow that's a huge thing for some people in this jenre. This felt more real than those fantastic versions though. there is lots more that you can do though! Please write more. I'm a father and would never act on my desires, this is all a lot of us have!

Thank you for the highly arousing, entertaining series!

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No hesitation …….5 Star 👏👏👏