All Comments on 'Sis and I and a Private Nude Dancer'

To much details of the night to get the last few part of fucking. It took to long to get to the action. It would of been better to leave some out from the first page and have more action with the fucking. Could of had the sisters do more to each other this is a incest section. Sorry but did not like it could of been way better well that's my thoughts.

Your story is great. I like the slow build-up but the sex part is indeed too short.

But maybe there is a second chapter to write: After a short break there can be more (raunchy) sex i.e. with lesbian or anal sex. Think about.

If you are not planning a second chapter where the two sisters engage in incestuous sex then this story is categorized wrong.

While I understand that he sees them as perfect, it would have been nice for him to have used more words. The phrase " you are perfect. Oh so perfect" was used a few too many times. Overall it was an interesting story

Well that was good. I liked how Billy always kept Cindy and Amanda in the loop. Even if he just had the other sister touching him while he pleasured the other. That made it way more fun as there was no looser or competition that evening.

Totally unexpected great story.

Anonymous comments should be banned.

I had no problem cumming with them at the end. Highly erotic and fucking hot!

Bachelor and bachelorette parties are marriage exempt activities

Very very hot. Loved it.