All Comments on 'Sis in Law's Wet Party Bus Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent start

There was no incest, but it certainly seems headed in that direction. Horny sisters could be down for anything. My only suggestion would be make your chapters longer. This one brief page was nice, but feels like it cut off at the knees. Great job for what there was though! 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Do I consider a Sister-in-law incest? I guess that's close enough.

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11/21/23 - Fucking Magic 15 Submitted. Hopefully in time for Thanksgiving. Part 16 is a real evolvement and is finished and half edited. The series might go to Part 18 or 17 might be really long with an Epilogue. 9/6/23 - Fucking Magic 14 submitted and coming at you in the n...

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