All Comments on 'Sis Learns to Love Spreader Bars'

Very hot, nicely done

Thanks for writing

Good premise.

Lacks tension.

Sister is too acquiescent.

Sex happens too fast.

Needed him asking each girl what he should do to the other.

Four stars.

Very well written. Explicit, descriptive and erotic. Good "cuming of age" and "tutorial

First sentence had me cracking up. Couldn't really get past that part, too over-the-top ridiculous.

Over the top on the bondage and short on the incest.

I agree with anonymous that this could have been more convincing if it had developed more slowly. It also needed a bit more variety in responses other than groaning and I-I-I. On the other hand, I find spreader bars /really/ hot, and you worked well with flirting with incest without him actually getting his dick in his sister (I think -- I began to lose track of what ended up where). Those women with their legs forced wide apart is just so penis-raising.

Damn! You have such a kinky mind! Love you, Bro!

Cheers

SAGE

I loved it. Great story telling, and kept me hanging on the words that were written. A part 2?? More please. :-)

Good writing, interesting premise, and a hot sex scene. Not sure I care for the sister's boundaries being pushed when she said no but that could just be a personal thing.

Seriously hot! I only suspected before, but now I’m sure, I have a need to Dom.