All Comments on 'Sis, Me and More'

A real hardcore incestuous family with all relations present, showing their love for each other by sucking and fucking unashamedly in completely plausible situations. Great erotic writing and I sure would like to read more of this family. May we expect a sequel or too soon, please?

The story was great! I would like to hear more about this family. It would be cool if everyone turned out to be bi too.

...but then it fell apart. Don't get me wrong, the action was hot and plentiful, but the overall errors and glaring mistakes in style, spelling, punctuation, and dialogue structure were too distracting to simply ignore. <br><br>

Punctuation goes inside the quotation marks. In prose, characters don't speak in a screenplay style; you're supposed to use quotes and stick to them. And while on the subject of dialogue...it needs work. Think about how people actually talk, and make sure it sounds natural. Take your time. If the story is good, we'll still read it, even if it is a bit longer.

A very good hot family frolic,plausible and full of fun.

Think you tried to do too much with it. Get a volunteer editor to improve your work.

I don't know how you folks come up with these wild stories but please keep them comming.

The best incest stories have both sister and brother a little reluctant and show how they come together and why. To jump from there to screwing every relative in sight is not as erotic as it could be. In fact it's really not erotic because it strains our credulity. Compare PacoFear's Words on Skin to this one. It's not even close.

Like most stories here, it really needs an experienced proof reader.