All Comments on 'Sissified Ch. 01'

Nice start

cant wait for the next part looks interesting

good start can't wait to see where this goes

Good beginning for your story and even better considering it is your first attempt. Let’s see where this takes us next.

Thank you all, this is my first attempt, pls give feedback about the story and do tell me if you want any specific thing to happen in the following part, I will try my best and try to add it, the 2nd part has already been submitted and will be released in couple of days

Good start, you might want to consider asking for another set of eyes to check for typos because there are a few that stick out. Hope you continue.

This was so great can’t wait to read more !

This is amazing. There is a super sexy dynamic and excitement between the two. Please keep adding more, and don't let the story end too abruptly, as a lot can be done in psychological control and humiliation between them. Very curious to all the situations and scenes that might unfold. Her using her wit to lead him deeper and deeper is really exciting. The way she teeters to almost neverminding her control while its obvious she is loving seeing where she can push him, then slipping into mistress mode and giving him tastes of completely submitting.

Talented writer, fun story. keep adding to it.

I like the idea you are going for, and I hope you will make an sexy series for it.

I think having an editor would help you communicate your ideas more clearly. For instance, this line from the story: "Well, I like seeing then dress up, get make up, look girls and stuff like that." I replied.

It doesn't make sense to me and was distracting. Fortunately, I did get the idea that he liked sissy porn.

Good luck with your writing.

Great story!

I try to imagine, i am Ron and will be turned into a sissy by my hot teacher.

A dream would be come true!

Every sissy has has that sexy hot teacher that we desire for them to train us!