All Comments on 'Sissified Ch. 02'

I like the story line but the story needs a lot of editing for grammatical and spelling mistakes.

english is not your first language, obviously

Great, loved it

should learn written English quite a lot more before submitting more stories.

I need some help with editing, if anyone can help please contact me.

Wish I had a teacher like that.

great story keep writing.

This is getting better and better and I have really enjoyed reading this. I will read the rest for sure

lucky sissy

Ron is really lucky to have such a great teacher.

sounds so nice being trained as a sissy makes Erika feel so sweet licking up cum satisfying men

I'm enjoying the series, but you really should find an editor. Keep writing!