All Comments on 'Sissy Awakening Ch. 03'

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SomaSlaveSomaSlaveover 3 years ago

I'm enjoying the stories, especially watching Sam struggle with his/her new role and life. The discovery that she's a pain slut and that she's willing to accept Jake because his Mistress desires it, not because he does, is the essence of submission and cuckoldry. It's not a test of true submission unless it's an action the sub finds truly distasteful. Well written.

SissySalinaSissySalinaover 3 years ago
Hopes

Totally enjoyable story with hope of the continuation. Can't wait to see where it goes from here but so far it is following a path that seems to be real.

senorlongosenorlongoover 3 years ago
Kind of sloppy

The story has been good, if not a bit extreme, but your writing got really sloppy as though you did it in a hurry and never bothered to proofread. That's usually a necessity if you want a high quality and readable story.

awyldsideawyldsideover 3 years ago

Ok so here is my rant for this chapter. He had two opportunities to end this. Yes I know he is really mostly into this sissy stuff but the relationship with Sarah is dead and he should move on. She is not showing any compassion or love to her live in boyfriend.

He had a chance after Jake raped him and he found out he was bleeding. He should have went into the bedroom and told Sarah that he was bleeding. If as I assume her attitude would have been, she may have said "it's just a little blood, deal with it", then he should have replied , "Just a little? Just a little?" He should have gone over to the raping asshole and smashed his face in over and over, dragged him out of bed and kicked him in the ball half a dozen times. He should have grab his hair and pulled him to the front door and thrown him out saying, " don't ever come back and don't ever talk to Sarah again or I'll put you in the hospital." Her reaction would have told the him his position. If she was really angry and shouting at him he would have know their relationship is over and told her to "Get the fuck out" too. If she was shocked and speakless, he could have said, " Sorry I was too much of a man and not enough sissy for you but that what had started out as a fetish, she had turned into a 24/7 unacceptable situation." Maybe they could have talked it out and come to a compromise.

I know, I know he is into this sissy stuff but I think she is taking advantage and no longer in love with him. Just the romantic in me that want to see an equally happy couple.

The other opportunity to stop would have been after coming back from being beaten and tortured and her not picking him up after. He should have marched into "her" bedroom and screamed in her face," I hate you! I hate you! I hate you! How could have you have done that to me? You don't love me, you don't even care for me! I hate you!" He should have gone to his room or bathroom an locked the door. Then pulled out the piercings and flushed them. Then ripped of the clothes and tore them up.

Ideally, she would have come to him and told him she did love him and she was sorry begging him to forgive her. He would have told her he didn't believer her an said he hated her again. If she pleaded more he could have asked for the key. If she give it to him he could have unlocked the cage and destroyed it. With more pleading from her they might have had deeper conversation about all of this.

Sorry for the long rant. I know it's your story and he is mostly into it. I just get worked up about someone being taken advantage of by an alleged loved one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Grow some balls wimp and get the hell out of there.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

What day the lucking sissy had but I think the sissy and his mistress should be sharing all this cock and mistress should be disciplining her sissy not others. Mistress is not making sure her sissy is looked after and care for properly. Mistress should be showing her sissy the love and itemize that a sissy deserves. I think it time for the sissy to move on and find a husband since her mistress does seem interested in her any longer.

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