All Comments on 'Sissy Training Facility - Day 02'

nice can't wait for her trianing to continue!!

Your training continues, as does your comfort level for writing this story.

I did notice a couple of changes I suggest. Hopefully I have identified these sufficiently and explained my suggestions fully.

a voice next to me and XXX replace with that made me jump; if you must and that made me jump. The first suggestion is more acceptable.

gonna . . . if Mistress is truly dominant, and educated, she would more likely say going to

The Mae here are experience and I don't want them to offend them . . . experienced (denoting previous/past experience and them to offend them . . . I think you meant to type and you to offend. . .

you read the flier use flyer yours is a pilot, mine a pamphlet

You have me virtually experiencing your sissification with your descriptive tale.