All Comments on 'Sister Act Ch. 01'

Definitely want to see Emily's fantasy come true!

have to say I like this read. Very hot but I one small critique of it. Lose the "babe" being used so much. makes them sound like a couple of 16 y/o surfer kids doing it

Nice, and I thought the occasional ALL CAPS speech was OK for emotional emphasis, not over done. Writers' preferences and devices differ, and this work was fairly well done.

Nice start to the story. Great detail. Looking forward to reading the other installments.

You over use the word babe to ridiculous levels. One character having that pet name for another is perfectly fine, but two? A bit too much. Overall, not bad at all. I find capitalization to be more geared toward screaming rather than loud moaning but that's just me. It did borderline on excessive but to each their own.

This superb story with an excellent plot is supplemented by outstanding descriptieve romance, superbly written by the author. Five stars.